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By deadmanseeking on 06/08/2017
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Written by mreli  (6/8/2017 8:41:56 AM)

I feel like you either were listening to music or had musical intentions with this one, seems more like a song than poem. Really liked it though, presents a strong message. My favorite line was:

"You may find yourself
With a smashed body
And a head
Blown away
On that day
That that demon
Comes to collect it`s pay."

Keep writing!


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Written by deadmanseeking  (6/8/2017 10:05:21 AM)

That verse is a true based on a true story about how drug dealer lieutenants treat mules that smoked too much product and shorted the boss. If the drugs don`t kill you, those that provide them might. Blessings, amenn

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