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Over and Out / challenge 14



Over and Out / challenge 14
By mwhousemouse on 05/07/2011
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OVER AND OUT


Defensively in hand from foe
rotate with fingers well that know
releasing so with varying speed
my travel makes more difficult to read.

Held in control of battery power
all adversarial efforts will devour.
At worst I hope remain in play, a toss
enable home I reach before offensive cross.

In passing, though, 't would better be
full contact to avoid a count of three.

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(rewrite May 22, 2011)

Defensively in hand from foe
rotate with fingers well that know
releasing so with varying speed
my travel makes more difficult to read.

The battery pitch and catch with care
so opposition swings strike empty air.
At worst I hope remain in play, a toss
enable home I reach before offensive cross.

In passing, though, 't would better be
wood contact to avoid a count of three.




© By mwhousemouse On 5/7/2011 2:55:57 PM
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