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for "sandy cove"

for "sandy cove"
By Jack Frost on 08/14/2011
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First of all allow me say that the picture is quite stunning and represents the piece. The poem does have a nice romantic quality to it. That is for sure. However, there are some issues that need to be addressed:

In the fourth line there is an apostrophe missing. I would also leave the comma out in that line.

In addition, lighthouse is one word. In line seven, we have two misspelled words. Let’s see if you can figure out which ones.

I applaud your effort and can see the beauty within the words.

Sir Jack Frost

© By Jack Frost On 8/14/2011 3:47:12 AM
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