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Late Night Wisdom? (Please critique, I have no idea if I'm any good or not)

Late Night Wisdom? (Please critique, I have no idea if I'm any good or not)
By OkieSnail on 03/10/2013
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Those songs are hard to relate to

What we have

Reality is hard to define when it comes to you my dear

What do I love?

Because without a doubt I love

Is it you? I thought so anyway

Or maybe something else

Sometimes I look at you and feel hollow

Sometimes I feel nothing at all

Sometimes I feel like the heroine of some great tragedy

Rarely it burns me

Your words

For that is all I have of you

Sound good

But feel unhealthy


You need someone to love

I need someone to love me


Surely others were happy with less


Of thinking too much

And small

I will stay here and think of you

Guilty as I am

Love, Obsession

Delusion, Lust

Routine, Trap

What I want is no longer clear

And I think

You agree

The darker side of all this

We tend to brush aside

Greedily sucking on the romance

And the words

Our one shot was stolen by God

Is it fair to hate him for it?

His only tools

A few drops of water

A modern pilgrimage

An unequal desire

Together because no one else

Inspires me like you

And Im the best

The world has handed you right now

What will it take? Is it worth it?

These questions fascinate me

And flavor the drops that fall

For you

Tinted with mistakes and naivity

I click-clack

Alone after it''s all done

"Meaningless Garble?"

Most likely

Im in deep

I couldnt stop now if I tried

But I cannot help and know

That this cannot be fair

To you or to me

My lack of knowledge will kill us

Or my devotion will make us

It comes down to how hard were willing to fight

And that. I just dont know.

? By OkieSnail On 3/10/2013 10:27:07 AM
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