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sunrise/under construction/revision one

sunrise/under construction/revision one
By westcoastmama on 09/11/2005
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*this is my first attempt to write something new in weeks. Inspiration just sort of hit me. I've already found some ways to revise this. I just had to post it before Inspiration left again. I like it so far, but I'm gonna make it great!*

share with me meandering kisses
and whispers that linger and press
against the morning window

and I will show you colors anew
unveiled with each new sunrise

one kiss, one touch is all I'd asked,

in turn you gave yourself to me

Sunrise/revision one

Share with me desparate kisses
and whispers that cling and press
against the morning windows

and I will show you colors anew
unveiled with each returning sunrise

One kiss, one touch is all I'd asked
yet you give me so much more.
I, in turn, give myself to you

*aaarrrggh! It's missing something. I'm gonna have to tear this thing apart

© By westcoastmama On 9/11/2005 5:00:10 PM
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