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Element of Surprise

Element of Surprise
By Lola29 on 11/18/2008
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She's so very lovely sitting wrapped
in the morning light.
Her hands so delicate and small
and yet she continues to craft her passion.
Demurely she raises her eyes above
the canvass to stare at me and
whispers, "please be still bella
so I can capture your every nuance."
As I smile just looking at her face,
she whispers, "that's the magic for which
we search; the green earth flourishing
in your eyes."
Her garden is a hamish nest from which
no bird would want to leave and being with
my mother is a performance filled with ease.
I asked her why she had never painted me
before, and she replied, "my masterpiece
was awaiting an element of surprise;
that one rare moment when I could glimpse
myself in your eyes."

© By Lola29 On 11/18/2008 3:29:05 PM
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