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Love is not gone PLEASE REVIEW



Love is not gone PLEASE REVIEW
By icanchangetheworld on 12/03/2008
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Metal so cold
i was alone

The warmth came
Loves drops cascaded upon my back
She was all my eyes could see
She was all i ever had
She is gone, fresh this memory
Only a few, but so vivid to me

I tried to climb, rite outside
I had thought i was done
I can still barely hear

"my baby, you're not done.
Get your hiney back in the tub"

I still today climb
with each passing sun
even though she's not here

All this i remember, then she gave
my sudsy eyes a little baby rub. I
loved her love in my metal tub. It
was her love i felt. No feeling now,
i know it was hard, i wonder how she
dealt. Dealt with the pain of leaving
me, crying her love, i was only a baby.

Left in my metal cold world, until she
came to take me out. Turned the nozzel
to stop the sprout, the warmth was still.
As still as could be, her touch was with me.

"My baby your done, look at what you won
for being such a good little boy"

Her love was my joy


© By icanchangetheworld On 12/3/2008 11:20:19 PM
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