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By EmptyBamboo on 09/16/2010
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Reviews: 7
A small happy sunflower
I picked on for you by the trail,
a small happy sunflower
in your chiseled tanned hand,
casting sunny reflections
upon the young smiling face
and your tight low-necked breast.

Walking along a narrow path
in the sweet meadows,
both excited, shy,
confused and mute,
with the hearts
beating so fast and loud...

Where has it all gone?


On Nov 22, 2010
two minor revision were made:

First line was:
A small happy sunflower I picked on for you by the trail

Last line was:
Where has all gone?

Pavel Nichkov
Sep 16, 2010

a critique is welcome

© By EmptyBamboo On 9/16/2010 12:00:20 AM
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